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Two Fateful Nights by AlexJohnD, literature

Hiccup On Ice (HiJack)(YOI AU) by AlexJohnD, literature

The 7 Deadly Sins (HiJack Week) by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Epilogue by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 18 by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 17 by AlexJohnD, literature

One Last Goodbye (HiJack Week) by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 16 by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 15 by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 14 by AlexJohnD, literature

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Two Fateful Nights by AlexJohnD, literature

Hiccup On Ice (HiJack)(YOI AU) by AlexJohnD, literature

The 7 Deadly Sins (HiJack Week) by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Epilogue by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 18 by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 17 by AlexJohnD, literature

One Last Goodbye (HiJack Week) by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 16 by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 15 by AlexJohnD, literature

The Life You Thought You Knew: Chapter 14 by AlexJohnD, literature

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Canadian English Badge by MAD-as-a-HATTER12 French 2 by Faeth-design Stamp: German Language None by MafiaVamp

Hey! My name is Alex :) I'm a hardcore Canadian and I love art in all forms. I'm a writer and occasional photographer. That's all I have really...Later days!

Son of Poseidon by Alaenakins Stamp - Camp Half-Blood by LitaOliveira Divergent: Candor (The Honest) by xxtayce Ravenclaw Stamp by rosa-pegasus

Favourite Movies
How To Train Your Dragon, Rise of the Guardians, Tangled, Brave, Burlesque, Sherlock Holmes
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Voltron, Dragons: Riders of Berk, Big Bang Theory, Elementary, Royals
Favourite Books
Percy Jackson, How To Train Your Dragon, Divergent
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The people who wrote those books ^

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hey I wanted to ask you for writing tips if thats ok?......how do you do dialogues in your stories. my bbf and i are writing our own fanfic and i'm working on the first pages right now but when it comes to short conversations or my characters just saying like "OMG" or something i'm just afraid i'm not doing it right....any tips??? 
Of course that's OK :) So dialogues were hard for me at the beginning, but I found a few good tips. First is to know that dialogue, including a bunch of short lines in rapid succession, is fine and it can be unavoidable. The trick is how you write it though. For example, take this dialogue:
"Hey."
"Hey, what's up?"
"Sarah dumped me."
"Oh I'm sorry Matt."
Short, quick, basic, too much of it gets boring to read, and adding "Matt said" after two of them isn't enough. So you need to add in the senses. What are they doing? What are they seeing? Are they moving? Is something happening in the background? If you can act it out with someone else that's even better. Try and get into it. Then add in the small detail and it can come out like this:

"Hey," Matt greeted, his eyes downcast.
"Hey, what's up?" Jason responded, concern lacing his voice as he took a step closer.
"Sarah dumped me." Jason's heart broke for Matt. He had really liked the girl and he was clearly upset. He wrapped his friend in a hug, rubbing his back slowly in an attempt to console his grieving buddy.
"Oh I'm sorry Matt," was all he could think to say. Just then Matt's phone started to ring and Jason pulled away.

So on and so forth. Basically make sure you don't forget to write int he surroundings. A few lines here or there without it is fine, but don't let it get away from you. Happy writing!
hey thank you for the writing tips :) (Smile) 

I posted my new story if you want to check it out.
also I can't believe you killed off stoick that was sooooo sad and now hiccup will never meet his real dad!!!!! and poor jack and valka too this is gonna be hard for them the most.

anyway great job but your messin with my feels Wink/Razz 
No problem :) I'll be sure to check it out when I have some spare time (working 4 jobs isn't exactly conducive to that XD Even now I should be working...sssshhhhh!!!! :P)

But thank you, thank you XD All this drama, I can't wait to have it unfold!
Pie.......

Love your avatar by the way. ^^
........is it apple??? :P

Thanks!! Love yours too :heart:
Yes it's apple. And other flavours! ^^

Thanks as well. ^^